Special Health Services

By admin, February 18, 2010 4:08 pm

Can you help me with my English homework please??

Please, can you correct my grammar and spelling mistake.

What are the advantage and disadvantage of the private or public medicine?

Nowdays in our country there are two parallel health services: a state health service (which is mainly free) and a sistem of private doctors and hospitals. Choose any of two services depend of the purchasing power. We can fine luxory hospitals with excellent attentions for their clients besides the very good doctors. On the other hand the public health service usually have their clinics dirty and crowded, the attention is bad, slow and never have medicines.

The main advantage of a private medicine is the special interest of their patients and the attention is quick and nice while the public health service is cheap and have the best specialist hospitals with excellent doctors.

In my opinion private medicine is too expencive but sometimes is necessary because is harder to get a good atenttion in the public service unless you meet someone to…..

I have corrected your work. my corrections are in capital letter just so that you can see it. so change it to lower case.

What are the advantageS and disadvantageS of the private or public medicine?

NowAdays in our country there are two parallel health services: THE state health service (which is mainly free) and THE private HEALTH CARE SYSTEM . THE Chose BETWEEN BOTH SERVICES dependS ON AN INDIVIDUAL’S purchasing power.
IN PRIVATE CLINICS, We can fine luxUry hospitals with excellent attention for their clients AS WELL AS very good doctors. On the other hand the public health serviceS usually have CROWEDED DIRTY CLINICS , POOR PERSONAL CARE and INSUFFICIENT medicines.

The main advantage of a private medicine is the special CARE AND ATTENTION THE PATIENTS GET AS WELL AS THE NICE ENVIRONMENT.
while the public health service is cheap and haS the best specialist hospitals with excellent doctors.

In my opinion private HEALTH CARE is too expensive but sometimes IT is necessary because is harder to get PROMPT attention in the public service unless you meet someone to…..

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